Saturday, August 11, 2007

my kind of woman...

her hair is open like the wild Ganges....
her mouth is soft like velvet and wet...
her eyes are a mystery to the observer in day light or in dark...
her long hands are like the stems of the jasmine....
her fingers are like vine they cling on to you...
her toes remind you of the pebbles near the ocean...
her hips are born to rule and swing you along..
her legs are fine like the stretch at the woods....

her body is yours for day and for night...
her soul remains untouched for today and forever....
this her is the she, who lives not by rules...
she lives in a land where she is her own muse.....

she is every women i know, she is the epitome of the earth below and the ruler of the blue skies above....
she s free like the wind, she flows like the river, she laughs like the rain and dances with the trees....
she lives in your heart..hear her close your eyes and hear her.....

9 comments:

  1. That's a nice one :)

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  2. Pratish-- 2 am got to pay my tribute to women..tnx

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  3. Beautifully written...

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  4. wow I wish I cud be this woman :)Keshi.

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  5. mº¿ºsh, brecht & noraAugust 13, 2007 at 12:58 AM

    hi there deepthi, very inspiring piece esp for a monday morning = ) thx for dropping by our blog! u hv yourself a great week ahead, will come visit your blog as often as i can = )

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  6. Chandramohan Kannan "CM"August 13, 2007 at 2:51 AM

    well... that was a very neat painting... I could close my eyes and visualise the first paragraph... each line could become an abstract art :)... keep it up...

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  7. p - for every women..thnxkeshi - u are babe,this fr you and every women out there..aditi- thnx aditinora - i am glad i made you monday,thnx for droppinby...CM - do u paint? if u do then paint this for me...i would be curious to knw how the painting comes about....:)

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  8. Chandramohan Kannan "CM"August 15, 2007 at 11:38 PM

    dear deepti, yes I paint, though just an ameteur at it... but I wish I had time to blog... let alone paint :)

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